Archive for the ‘Second Nature’ Category

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Cocktail Hour

July 10, 2011

I’ve been a guest on the Cocktail Hour last night (well, evening for me, but early afternoon for Andy & The Rev).

In their fun podcast, they discuss lesbian fiction and fanfiction. Sometimes, they have the author of the book they discuss on the show. And they always have a cocktail (or two, or three :-) ). This show’s cocktail was the Sweet Tight Pussy– okay, this blog is now rated NC-17 because of a cocktail :-)

My own cocktail was much more tame in alcohol content and name. It’s called “Police Control” (pineapple juice, cream, coconut syrup, grenadine, and chocolate sauce).

We talked about Hidden Truths, my other novels, and future projects.

Check it out. And while you’re at it, you might also want to listen to a few of their other episodes. They already discussed a few of my old favorites.

And if you send them an e-mail and answer a question or two correctly, you have a chance of winning a free signed copy of one of my books. You can find the questions here

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Rainbow Romance Award

February 18, 2011

Seems this is the month of awards for L-Book authors.

First, Fran Heckrotte was awarded the Alice B. Medal, an award that is given to writers who “have careers distinguished by consistently well-written stories about lesbians.”

Today I found out that Conflict of Interest won a Rainbow Romance Award for Excellence in the romantic suspense category.  Next of Kin placed third in the same category, and Second Nature holds the third place in the Science Fiction/Fantasy category.

Congratulations to all winners and runners-up!

Here‘s a complete list.


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Short story “When the Cat’s Away”

February 9, 2011

I know I keep saying I’m not a short story writer, and I know I keep saying that a writer is not a piano player in a lounge, taking requests, but here it is anyway: another short story starring my best friend’s favorite characters.

Happy birthday, Marion!

Read the rest of this entry ?

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More award news

October 28, 2010

Wow, it seems this is the week of award news. I found out that Second Nature is a finalist for an EPIC’s e-book award.

The EPIC’s e-book awards were once known as “eppies,” and they’ve been awarded annually since 2000 by the EPIC (Electronically Published Internet Connection). The winners will be announced at the EPICon convention in Williamsburg, Virginia, on March 10-13, 2011.

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LFRC Award — favorite book cover

October 25, 2010

The LFRCA (Lesbian Fiction Readers Choice Award), a program with annual awards for favorite lesbian fiction and favorite lesbian fiction book covers, just announced the results for the awards for favorite book covers of 2009.

Second Nature was one of the book covers that received the most votes.

The other favorite book covers of 2009 were:

Everafter




The Sublime and Spirited Voyage of Original Sin




Thief of Always




Veil of Sorrow




Warming Trend

Congratulations to Sheri, the graphic artist who created the cover of Second Nature, and thanks to the members of the LFRCA.

By the way, the LFRCA is a yahoo group that anyone can join.

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Motivation

September 30, 2010

I’ve blogged about the character’s conscious goals, which drive the plot. But characters also need to have deeper motivations, something that makes them want to obtain their goal. They might not be aware of their underlying motivation, but you as the author need to know.

The German playwright Friedrich Hebbel once said, “In a good play, everyone is right.” It means that readers might not like the actions of a character and might not be able to relate to the character’s goal, but they should be able to understand and maybe even sympathize with the motivation.

For example, Griffin from Second Nature is a saru — a soldier who spies on humans and, if necessary, kills them. Not a very likable character, you might think. But I think readers can understand why she would agree to go on these kind of missions. She wants to ensure the survival of her species, which is on the brink of extinction.

So let’s take a look at motivation.

Abraham Maslow’s hierarchy of needs can be a handy tool to understand your characters’ motivation. The hierarchy of needs has five levels.

On the bottom are the physiological needs that we need to survive: food, water, air, sleep. Next are safety needs, the need for shelter and for physical and financial security. Then come the social needs (love, friendship, belonging), followed by esteem needs (earning recognition, respect, accomplishments, and self-respect). At the top of the pyramid is self-actualization, the need to reach your full potential as a human being (truth, justice, wisdom, morality).

According to Maslow’s theory, the needs at the bottom must be satisfied before people pursue higher-level needs. For example, if you are fighting to stay alive, you aren’t concerned with making friends.

While I think Maslow’s hierarchy has its limits reflecting the complexity of human needs, it can be a helpful tool when you figure out what motivation is behind your characters’ goals.

Let’s see… In Second Nature, Jorie’s goal is to get her novel published. This goal might be motivated by her physiological and safety needs, after all, she’s a full-time writer and needs her royalties to put food on the table. But it’s also motivated by higher-level needs: the need to prove to herself and her mother that she can make it on her own (esteem needs).

You can also use different needs to create internal conflict. For example, in Hidden Truths, Rika’s initial motivation is safety. She wants to secure her future by marrying a man who thinks she’s his mail-order bride — which she is not. So in order to fulfill this need, she’d have to lie and pretend for the rest of her life, so the need for food and safety conflicts with the need for love (she doesn’t love her betrothed), self-esteem, and self-actualization. At one point of the story, she will need to choose between these conflicting needs.

More about conflict in the next blog post.

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free short story

September 22, 2010

My publisher, L-Book, offers a free short story sequel to Second Nature.

The title of the short story is Babysitter Material. Some of you might have already discovered it on my Web site, but now you can download it as a free e-book (epub, mobipocket, or Adobe pdf).

If you haven’t read Second Nature or any of the other short stories, you could still read Babysitter Material, but I suspect you’ll enjoy it more if you have read the previous stories.

Here‘s the correct chronological order (top to bottom).

Enjoy!

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Pacing and mood

July 11, 2010

If we choose words and sentence structure carefully, we can create a mood and let readers know how our characters are feeling without telling them.

Here’s a passage from Second Nature:

Leaning her head against the back of the couch, she looked out the window.

Snowflakes floated down to earth, forming a white curtain that separated the house from the rest of the world.

Want to take a guess how Griffin is feeling right now? What kind of scene this will be — relaxed or fast-paced?

You probably guessed correctly: Readers who read the novel know that Griffin considers being separated from the world a GOOD thing. The snow that separates them from the rest of the world adds to the cozy feeling and helps create the mood for what will turn into a love scene.

I used softer words (floated) to create that relaxed mood. Paragraphs and sentences are longer in this scene. That doesn’t mean that all sentences and all paragraphs are long.

The setting and weather can be used to show or reflect a character’s emotions. The same setting can be described and seen very differently. Someone who is in a good mood and maybe in love would see getting caught in the rain as romantic. Someone who is already sad would feel miserable after getting drenched. They surely wouldn’t notice the beauty of it.

I could have described the falling snow as a hostile thing to show that my POV character is feeling trapped. For example:

Heavy snowflakes hit the earth, smothering it.

Or I could try for a more playful mood if my character is feeling joyful:

Snowflakes danced along the roof and brushed teasingly over hills and trees.

Or if my character was in a bad mood, maybe sad or pessimistic, maybe she would see this:

Dark clouds, heavy with threatening snow, loomed overhead.

If she was in a good, optimistic mood, hopeful of the future, she would see it like this:

A white blanket of snow covered the hills, giving even Jorie’s old house a new, untouched look.

In a way, that’s a form of “show, don’t tell.” Word choice and pacing can let readers know how the POV character is feeling without having to tell them.


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Disagreeing with beta readers

June 29, 2010

For my own novels, I work with a beta reader, two critique partners, and several test readers since I try to cast a wide net and get different opinions from different people. I also beta read for other writers.

A few times, I’ve been asked, “What do you do when you just don’t agree with your beta reader? Do you just ignore her comments?”

No, I never do that. If you have a good beta reader, who sacrifices her time to beta read for you, and then proceed to ignore her advice, that’s bad manners and bad for your writing.

That doesn’t mean that you have to follow your beta reader’s advice every time. I have dismissed some of my beta reader’s advice, but never without careful consideration and not without first making sure I understand what she means and making sure I’m not just dismissing what she says because I’m too lazy or don’t know how to apply her feedback for revisions.

Beta readers are just people with opinions. Sometimes, they’ll be right; sometimes, they’ll be wrong. And sometimes, there is no right or wrong. What’s right for one reader will be wrong for another. We all have personal preferences and experiences that influence how we see fictional characters and situations.

For example, in Second Nature, I had Jorie – who is a writer struggling with her novel while a deadline approaches – send her visiting mother to have pancakes with Griffin so that she can stay home and continue to write.

I got shouts of outrage from my non-writing test readers. How could Jorie do that to her poor mother? How egoistical of her!

My critique partners, who are writers, reacted quite differently. They thought it perfectly understandable and acceptable that Jorie tried to get in some writing time while her mother was visiting.

So, what do I do with feedback that conflicts with my own opinion?

Well, I take it as a diagnostic tool. If a beta reader reacts strongly to a scene, there might be readers who will later experience this scene just like my beta reader does, while others might experience it more like I do.

So I try to address my beta reader’s concern in some way in the story.

In Second Nature, that meant Jorie still sends her mother off to have pancakes with Griffin while she stays home and writes. But she feels a bit guilty about it and asks her mother if it’s okay. So now I hope even my non-writing readers won’t think Jorie is a cold-hearted bitch.

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Golden Crown Literary Society Awards

June 7, 2010

The Golden Crown Literary Society (GCLS) held its annual conference last weekend, and the GCLS awards (“Goldies”) were presented on Saturday.

I woke up to an inbox full of e-mails, telling me “congratulations,” but giving me no clue as to what I had won since three of my novels had been shortlisted. The GCLS hadn’t posted the award winners yet, so I clicked through all e-mails until I got to messages from Jeanine Hoffman, a fellow L-Book author who attended the conference.

She e-mailed me on her iPhone during the award presentation, telling me Backwards to Oregon had just won a Goldie for historical romance. Her second e-mail told me that Next of Kin won in the category romantic suspense. By the time I got to her third e-mail, which let me know that Second Nature had won an award for best speculative fiction, I was in shock. A very pleasant shock, of course :-)

I can only say thank you to all the people who made this possible — my beta readers, test readers, editors, and my publisher, Roxanne Jones from L-Book, who accepted the awards on my behalf.

Here’s a list of all Goldie winners:

Anthology — non-erotica
And Baby Makes More — eds. Goldberg/C. Rose
Year’s Best Lesbian Fiction ’08 — ed. Fran Walker

Debut Author:
Keile’s Chance-Dillion Watson
October’s Promise-Marianne Garver
Waltzing at Midnight-Robbi McCoy

Dramatic/general fiction:
Detours-Jane Vollbrecht
Family Affair-Saxon Bennett
Gemini-Geonn Cannon

Erotica:
Attractions of the Heart-Cheri Crystal
Nights Kiss- Catherine Lundoff

Historical Romance:
Backwards to Oregon-Jae
Kicker’s Journey Loic Cloarec Hart

Mystery/Thriller:
Possessing Morgan-Erical Lawson
Veritas-Anne Laughlin
Who’ll Be Dead For Christmas-Kate Sweeney

Paranormal Romance:
Barking at the Moon-Nene Adams
Everafter-Nell Stark/Trinity Tam

Poetry:
Bird Eating Bird-Kristen Naca
In Praise of Falling-Cheryl Dumesnil
The Heart’s Traffic-Ching-in Chen

Romantic suspense/intrigue/adventure:
Next of Kin-Jae
The Scorpion-Gerri Hill
Thief of Always-Kim Baldwin/Xenia Alexiou

Short Story/Essay/Collections Non-erotica
Mean Little Deaf Queer-Terry Galloway
My Sweet Wild Dance-Mikaya Heart
Outsiders-K. Sweeney/ JD Glass/L Ames/S Smith/G Beers

Speculative Fiction:
Forever Mine-KD Williamson
Second Nature-Jae
The Veil of Sorrow-Crystal Michallet-Romero

Traditional Contemporary Romance
Keile’s Chance-Dillion Watson
Stranded-Blayne Cooper
Worth Every Step-KG MacGregor

Ann Bannon Popular Choice Award:
Beggar of Love-Lee Lynch

Director’s Award:
Rosa Moran

Trailblazer Award:
Ellen Hart

Congratulations to all Goldie winners!

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